Monday, April 30, 2012

Robo-readers synthesis


Robo-readers

While robo-readers are able to score student essays at a rapid rate, they have many shortcomings that overwhelm their benefits. Such a generic system will take variety out of writing and eliminate valuable feedback.

The biggest problem with robo-readers is that they “cannot draw out meaning” and “[care] nothing for creativity or truth,” (Kolowich, Steve. “A Win for Robo-Readers.” Inside Higher Ed.) The point of writing should be to send a message and to get a point across; if robo-readers are the sole audience of a piece, and the message isn’t even being considered, then what’s the point of writing at all?

Robo-readers also don’t offer as much advice for improvement as a live reader would. Teachers are always able to give valuable, specific feedback about their students’ writing, and that helps the students grow as writers. The generic comments issued by the robo-readers such as, “A few grammar errors detected,” and, “a few misspelled words,” (“Robo-readers: the new teachers’ helper in the U.S.” Reuters) really aren’t valuable feedback.

Robo-readers also have the potential to take the variety out of students' writing. Because they grade by such conventional principles, students can't be as stylistically creative with their writing. Students will be downgraded for using short paragraphs, and sentence fragments, which often add flair to writing. Michael Winerip says in "Robot Eyes As Good As Humans When Grading Essays" that, "if those are breaking the rules, you're going to get a more and more homogenized form of writing."

The quality of writing should be valued more than the speed at which it's graded; therefore, the job of scoring students' writing should be left to those who can appreciate content and variety and give valuable feedback.

Wednesday, April 11, 2012

Map!


This map, New Map of the states of Georgia South and North Carolina, Virginia and Maryland, including the Spanish provinces of West and East Florida, was made by Purcell in 1788 of the Southern part of the East Coast. An interesting part of this map is the picture in the lower left corner. There are a bunch of babies with wings that might be angels, and they are holding a banner. It’s hard to read because the font is blurry. There is an eagle at the top, which represents America, and it looks like it’s perched on a globe. The image of America on top of the world might symbolize its hopes for domination. There is an American flag on the right side of the picture. America had only been independent for 12 years, but the people were patriotic about their flag.